My+Odyssey


 * This is a paragraph of a writing I did based on the story, “The Odyssey.” My personal Odyssey was about my graduation day with my family surprising me at the end. I liked writing this because it made me talk about Jeff and not in 1st person. I also think I could have added more descriptive language and imagery to help the reader better understand it. **

= = ** My Odyssey ** = = === He eventually overcame all his obstacles and is returning home. As he walked into his house, his parents and everybody were gone. “Where could they be?” he wondered. He finally found a note in the kitchen and it said, “Go to backyard.” So he walked back there and was greeted by a “surprise” by everybody that was there including Jeff’s parents, family, and friends. They had a surprise graduation party for me. As they were talking, he told them about his adventures with the ghosts, the lovely ladies, and the challenges he faced trying to make it home. They thought that he made the story up but he’ll let them believe what they want. It was a long journey home, but it was worth it. ===